I passed through valuable social Experience, and I would like to write it to you, firstly I comply with firas point of view in his last article/ decision to write about real thing happen or met in his/our life, secondly I am strengthening our relation by writing personal experience finally to improve myself in writing through your comments and corrections, especially this article includes a conversations parts. To avoid any possibility of boredom feeling, I planned to extend it to be in more than one part/ article.
While I was busy as usual every mornning in the office, my telephone rang, she was my sister calling from Qatar, her voice was very gloomy, and she was asking me if I could be in Doha urgently? At that time I felt someone screams me from inside myself, after some words I promised her to do my best but please remember today is the weekend therefore it will not be easy to book for today.
After ten hours I met my sister in Doha Airport! she deeply cried on my shoulder, and her worm tears wet my shirt saying your quick arrival erased half of my sadness, Know I have thrust support to face my troubles, I replay now you get sincere support to solve and pass over your difficulties, so we spent around one hour in very nice quit café to understand the circumstances, her point of view and we exchanged our opinions.
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Ahmed, here are some of my reactions to your post:
I had a valuable social experience about which I would like to write to you. Firstly, I agree with Firas' point of view in his last article regarding his suggestion to write about real things that happen in our life. Secondly, I am strengthening our relation by writing about my personal experience. Finally, I seek to improve myself in writing through your comments and corrections, especially as this article includes conversation parts.
To avoid any possibility of boredom, I plan to extend it to be in more than one part/ article.
While I was busy as usual every morning in the office, my telephone rang. It was my sister calling from Qatar, her voice was very gloomy, and she was asking me if I could come to Doha urgently. At that time I felt someone scream at me from inside myself! After a few words I promised her to do my best but asked her to remember today was the weekend, therefore it would not be easy to book for today.
Ten hours later I met my sister in Doha Airport! She cried deeply on my shoulder, and her warm tears wet my shirt. She said that my quick arrival had erased half of her sadness. She said that she knew she had needed my support to help her face her troubles. I replied that I was there to back her up and to try to solve her problems. So we spent around an hour in a very nice quiet café to understand the circumstances of her distress from her point of view and we exchnged our opinions.
To be continued...
Dear Ahmed, remember that you need to use Reported Speech when giving such information.
This was VERY personal and interesting, now we are wondering if you managed to put your sister's mind completely at rest. It must be wonderful to have such a big brother who will come at a moment's notice to help his brother or sister. I have never had such a relationship with my three sisters...
Bye for now
Sorry about the delay
Keep posting!
Tony
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